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PostSubject: kiki clan(done)   Fri Feb 20, 2009 4:22 pm

Name: Kiki Clan

Village: Sunagakure

Clan Symbol: Serpent Dragons

Kekkei Genkai: Puppet like clan that has three dolls that are human like an are simmlier to sessoi an have a soul sealed in side them to make them free thinkers. they move can can talk! each doll has its own chakra network. an they can eat like normal people to get chakra back >.>

the dolls(the guys are the dolls the girl is my char.)


History: Suki was a the younger of 4 her 3 older brother where all puppet masters. they became ill all at the same time. they wished to live for ever so they turned them selfs in to puppets but the still have they human like side. suki wanted them to pay attion to her more. so he learned how to take controll over them. she uses them like body gaurds an they over time learned to respect her more for they relized she was just trying to make them stay. so they became her fulltime body gaurds. they still remembered they knew when they where human. ryu kiki the water user. moko the earth user an riku the lighting user. suki uses wind jutsu. the brothers are jounin level.

the clan is the best at making puppets, they where the most inventive clan in the whole sand village. they became so powerful that they learned to seal souls in side of dolls to make a living army of puppets but the hard part was finding willing poeple to do this so the clan just used them selfs an in return they found how to make them selfs imortal to a point.

the clan was foundied when two clans joined. a clan who made puppets an a clan who used puppets. over time the clan slowly died off leaving suki ryu moko an riku all alone they grew up in to what they are now.

Clan Leader: Suki

Secret Clan Techniques:
Spoiler:
 

the blue doll ryu kiki.

RYUS WATER JUTSU

<ACADEMY>

Name: Artificial Thin Mist Skill [Jinkouteki Ruikiri no Jutsu]
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Water
Description: The user uses this jutsu around water to create a very thin mist. This mist is too thin to be used as any sort of cover but it can be used as a source for mist based jutsu.

Name: Morning Dew [Asastsuyu]
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Water
Description: The user creates mist again but instead of placing it in the air they place it on the ground. This makes the ground very slick and slippery for the opponent. Now while this is useless on dirt, sand, or dry ground it is very effective on grass and rocks. It can effect the user aswell, but the user does have the advantage of suprise.




GENIN>

Name: Mist Blade [Kiri no Yaiba]
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Water
Description: Using this technique the user can create an extended sharpened edge made of mist from their hands or an already existing weapon.

Name: Mist Clone Skill [Oboro Bunshin no Jutsu]
Rank: D
Type: Genjutsu
Element: Neutral
Description: A technique that creates false clones of the user. The clones are used as a diversion while the user attacks. The clones are incapable of attacking, but any attacks made on them pass right through.

Name: Water Clone Skill [Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu]
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Water
Description: A skill which creates clones composed of water. The water clones are significantly weaker than the user but are still capable of inflicting damage on the opponent. A clone is incapable of preforming techniques, and has about one forth of his creators strength and skills.

Name: Water Shield Technique [Mizu Tate no Jutsu]
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Water
Description: A shield of water is formed around the user as a cylindrical barrier that reaches just above the user's head. The shield lasts for 4 posts, and after the initial creation that user can manipulate the water. This allows for water spikes, tentacles, hands and the like, though these appendages are not dexterous enough to handle a weapon. The bad thing is that the shield isn't that reliable, stronger (Chuunin Level) techniques can get through it but it is a good defense against simple taijutsu techniques.


<CHUUNIN>

Name: Water Reflection Clone Technique [Mizukaisou Bunshin no Jutsu]
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Water
Description: A Jutsu that makes the user's reflection in the water able to step out and attack on its own. This type of Water Clone is just as powerful as the user is though the clone is unable to use any form of Ninjutsu or Genjutsu. A single hit destroys this clone.

Name: Choking Fog [Ikigurushii Enmu]
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Water
Description: The user super condenses the mist near the opponent making it hard to breathe. Although this isn't enough to kill someone or to do any real damage, it is enough to slow down their movements and place them into a panic-stricken state of mind. This altered state of mind helps the user in pulling off plans or just in simply finding them.

Name: Hidden Mist Skill [Kirigakure no Jutsu]
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Neutral
Description: A highly effective cover technique which blankets an area in a thick fog, confusing the senses of the enemy. Unless the user is trained to fight without the use of his eyes this jutsu does not provide a significant combat advantage. This can also be used as a source for Mist based techniques.

Name: Water Sword [Mizu no Yaiba]
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Water
Description: Creates a sharp sword made of solid water in the user's hand. The user can freely decide what shape and size he/she wants the sword to have, from a tiny dagger to a massive decapitator sword. However, this sword is weak and can only do minor slashes to human flesh, and can easily beaten by fire or high-pressure winds.

Name: Water Prison Skill [Suirou no Jutsu]
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Water
Description: A skill used to trap the victim inside a prison of water; it is very difficult to escape. The only downside to this technique is that the user must keep one arm inside the bubble at all times in order for the victim to remain imprisoned.


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PostSubject: Re: kiki clan(done)   Fri Feb 20, 2009 4:44 pm



Name: Water Instantaneous Body Skill [Mizu Shunshin no Jutsu]
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Water
Description: A technique which allows the user to transport from one place to another through puddles of water.

Name: Water Collision Destruction [Suishouha]
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Water
Description: After creating a large tornado of water the user can make it bear down on their opponent and move it at their will. Purely offensive and lacks any defensive capabilities.

<JOUNIN>

Name: Water Trap of Restraint [Mizuwana no Yokuseiryoku]
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Water
Description: Creates a large body tourniquet out of nearby water to wrap around an opponent or an unruly prisoner restraining their legs and arms. This can also be set up like a trap, for if somone steps on a puddle the trap will go off and attempt to restrain them.

Name: Water Element; Water Barrier [Suiton; Suijinheki]
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Water
Description: An ultimate defense of the Mist Shinobi, Suiton Suijinheki requires a great deal of water to work. Upon completing the technique, a large, swirling barrier of water surrounds the user and any nearby allies. This protects against any fire technique, as well as any Ninjutsu that are projectiles by nature. Attempting to breach the barrier with Taijutsu is self-defeating, the opponent who attempts to do so will find himself being whirled around the barrier and slammed into the ground several times throughout the duration of the technique as he is caught in its strong current.

Name: Water Element; Water Dragon Blast Skill [Suiton; Suiryuudan no Jutsu]
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Water
Description: A powerful attack that creates a huge current of water in the shape of a dragon, which is then sent towards the opponent. Essentially a devastating single target attack.

Name: Water Element; Water Shark Blast Technique [Suiton: Suikoudan no Jutsu]
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Water
Description: A powerful attack that requires its target to be on or near the water, this technique creates a large shark comprised of water that can be used to attack in one of two ways. Primarily, the shark is sent towards the opponent at a charge, attempting to strike the opponent with extreme bashing force as well as trying to rend him with its teeth. The second, more devious use involves the shark attempting to swallow the opponent. In this case, the shark is hidden under the water until it attacks. If it manages to swallow an opponent, he is trapped within a sphere of water for 2 posts as the shark itself dissolves. After an attack, successful or not, it vanishes.


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PostSubject: Re: kiki clan(done)   Fri Feb 20, 2009 4:54 pm

MOKOS EARTH JUTSU


<Academy>

Name: Metamorphic Rock [Henseigan]
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Description: The user can take any rock they can get their hands onto and change it's shape into almost anything. They can widen it, they can lengthen it, and they can even sharpen the edges.


<Genin>

Name: Statue Clone Skill [Doton; Zoubunshin no Jutsu]
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Description: The user gathers a large amount of stone and creates a bunshin out of it. The Bunshin is slightly larger than the user to protect more and is very enduring but it is incapable of any movement.

Name: Knight of Dust [Chiri no Kishi]
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Description: A technique where the user gathers dust and dirt particles and makes them into armor. The user brings forth the particles to their skin then adheres them to their skin and infuses them with chackra making a thin layer of weakened armor. Because of the extra weight gained through this process the user's speed suffers some but not to any great extent.

Name: Stone Sword Skill [Iwaken no Jutsu]
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Description: By placing their hand on the ground and infusing it with chackra the user is able to pull out a sword made of stone. Because of the low level of the technique the sword will be slightly duller and heavier than its metal counterpart. It is good for use as a blunt weapon though.

Name: Subtle Shockwaves [Seichi Yoshin]
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Description: A good deal of strength is required on the user's part for this jutsu. The user gathers up some chackra into their fist and punches the ground send a strong vibrating shockwave through the ground that will knock an opponent off balance.

Name: Stone Needles [Senbon no Iwa]
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Description: The user creates a large amount of needles out of rock, dirt, and clay and sends them flying toward their opponent. The needles are sent out from the ground at an upward slant toward the opponent.


<Chuunin>

Name: Earth Element; Mud River [Doton; Doryu Taiga]
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Description: In this common earth jutsu, the user converts part of the floor\ground that he and his opponent are standing on into a sliding river of mud and earth. The opponent quickly loses his or her standing and starts sliding wherever the mud river will take him or her.

Name: Stone Clone Skill [Iwabunshin no Jutsu]
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Description: An advanced version of the Statue Clone Skill, this jutsu takes the surrounding rocks and forms them into a moving constructs that can be made to look like almost anything. The creature retains the resiliency of its previous incarnation, and even has incredible strength, but it is slow and the chakra that holds it together dissipates after a time.

Name: Earth Element; Inner Decapitation Skill [Doton; Shinjuu Zanshu no Jutsu]
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Description: This earth jutsu allows the user to "dive" into the ground and move around in it as if it was water, or even thin air. The user's chakra displaces the earth around him or her, moving out of the way to create a tunnel just ahead of the user. This ability allows the user to get near an opponent without notice and when below him, or even pull down the opponent to ground. This jutsu does not confer any special ability to breath through the dirt, nor does it allow one to sense things above the ground. One weakness of this jutsu is that, while the user can pass underground with great stealth, the displacement of the ground on the surface when both entering and exiting makes a faint noise.

Name: Hidden Earth Instantaneous Body Skill [Iwagakure Shunshin no Jutsu]
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Description: An ability which allows the user to transport from one area to another by slowly lowering his body to the ground and eventually become "buried" in it. The user has to have been to the area before, and be able to sense the location with his own chakra before being able to transport him there. This means that the distance is limited to about one mile.

Name: Earthen Disruption [Tsuchi Chaca]
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Description: The user takes a large amount of chackra and places it into their fist. The user then sends the punch into the ground. The chackra is sent into the ground and once there it explodes causing the opponent to be thrown upward somewhat and be hit by stray rocks flying through the air.


ANBU>

Name: Earth Clone Technique [Doton; Tsuchi Bunshin no Jutsu]
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Description: By using clay and dirt in between rocks that are used to strike opponents, powerful yet fast clones can be made from the surrounding terrain. While the clones are exceptional in all ways, they only last a small amount of tine before crumbling apart.


Jounin>


Name: Bronze Clone [Doton; Douzobunshin no Jutsu]
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Description: A clone composed of the innards of the earth. It is a mixture of rock, clay, and raw bronze ore. The clay rests within the joints while the rock sits at unimportant parts and the bronze ore sits at more critical spots. With this addition of the bronze the clone is much faster but weaker than the other clones.

Name: Earth Element; Earth Barrier Prison [Doton; Kekkai Doroudoumu]
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Description: A technique which completely surrounds an opponent in a prison made of clay or earth. The user then is able to absorb the enemy's chakra through the walls. Since the walls of the prison are infused with a user's chakra, any damage taken by the prison is capable of being repaired/regenerated by that chakra.

Name: Earth Element; Earth Dome [Doton; Iwa no Doomu]
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Description: A defensive variation of "Earth Element; Earth Barrier Prison," this jutsu retains its counterpart's characteristics and more. Instead of encasing one's opponent in a dome, this jutsu enables the user to shield himself inside a thick dome of stone which is not only difficult to destroy, but also automatically repairs any damage done to it.

Name: Earth Element; Underworld Swamp [Doton; Yomi Numa]
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Description: A technique which gradually creates a large viscous swamp underneath an opponent. The enemy is unable to move once trapped within the swamp, also it has the distinct ability to subdue any chakra effect, and hence one cannot walk on it using chakra. The swamp is roughly 10 feet in depth.

Name: The Five Pillars of the Colossus [Goh Chuuseki no Colossus]
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Description: The user charges up a large amount of chackra into their hands and slams them onto the ground releasing a large amount of seals over the ground in a 50-yard radius. At five corners of the area large 5 pillars are brought up with a lone mark on them that represents chackra. The chackra in these pillars creates a special dust that counters any use of chackra. This makes any chackra based moves useless in this area.

Name: Land Meteor [Nagareboshichi]
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Description: The user summons up a large boulder the size of a small building and launches it at their opponent. Because of the size of the boulder and the friction the air gives it as it rolls the boulder will catch on fire making it look sort of like a meteor.


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PostSubject: Re: kiki clan(done)   Fri Feb 20, 2009 4:58 pm

rikus lighting jtusu

GENIN

Name: Conductor Skill
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Description: The basis of all Raiton jutsu, Doutai no Jutsu allows a shinobi to absorb ambient electricity from the environment for use in electricity and lightning related skills. This collection of ambient electricity is a passive form of this skill, and thus can be used without exerting chakra.


Name: Thunder Clone Jutsu
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Description: Forms solid clones from pure lightning and when they are distorted they explode into a blast of lightning shocking the one that distorted the clone.

CHUUNIN

Name: Chidori
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Description: a weaker veision of lighting blade. the user make chakra flow to there hands an it sounds like a 1000 birds flaping an its a strong eletic attack.

Name: Chidori Current
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Description: A jutsu that doesn’t require hand signs only focus. Using current there will be a very noticeable lightning aura coming off you. It also shocks anyone that gets near you. You can also extend the any weapon you have as large as humanly possible without adding on weight.

Name: Chidori Spear
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Description: You create a chidori and form it into a spear. Then throw it at your opponent at high speed.

JOUNIN

Name: Current Blast version two
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Description: After using chidori current you can gather energy inside of your body and release it at once destroying the nearby area. Also for 4 posts there is lightning surging throughout the ground due to the explosion. Or if you use chidori spear you can explode them while in mid air or when they are in someone or something with devastating results.

Name: Lightning pinpoint
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Description: By using any metal object you can transport yourself and others to it almost instantly.

Name: Grasp of the Lightning God
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Description: The user gathers a tremendous amount of eletricity into their hands. The user then grabs the opponent with both hands and sets up a powerful current of eletricity through the opponent's body. This eletricity not only electrifies its victim, but also renders the area around where the opponent is holding immobile, although other parts of the victim's body can freely move.

Name: Human Lightning Rod
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Description: The user emits a powerful field of electrical energy; anyone caught within it gains a negative charge. The user positively charges the air around him, meaning that anyone within the field is constantly shocked by lightning. Although this jutsu is almost impossible to dodge while within the field, the field only extends 10 meters from the user. This jutsu also does a great job of disrupting electrical jutsu aimed at the user.

Name: Lightning Scorch Technique
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Description: The user performs a short row of hand seals, ending with his hands pointing towards his victim. Lightning bolts shoot out of his finger tips and dance along the victim's flesh, causing severe burns all over the body. This jutsu has the advantage of being difficult to block or dodge without the victim hiding behind something that doesn't conduct electricity.

Name: Lightning Cage Technique
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Description: This technique uses chakra to set up a powerful web of electrical currents surrounding a victim. Lightning shoots from the user's fingertips and surrounds the victim, shocking him as the current surrounds him. The cage deals little damage to those trapped within, but anyone trying to leave is in for a real shock. Unfortunately, while the cage does a good job of keeping most people inside, it also damages anyone trying to reach into the field to attack. Magnetic currents protect the victim from attacks from metal objects, and electrical attacks are likewise useless

Name: Lightning Screen
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Description: After performing a row of hand-seals, the user places his hands on the ground and in front of him a large and powerful field of lightning erupts from the ground and lasts for a few seconds before dissipating. This field not only shocks anyone unlucky enough to touch it, it also does a good job of deflecting lightning techniques, not to mention anything involving metal

Name: Static Clone Technique
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Description: After a row of hand-seals, several electrical fields erupt from the user's hands and form into vaguely humanoid shapes. A simple genjutsu is used to then make the fields look like the user or anyone else the user chooses. Although the clones can't exert any physical force, if an opponent comes into contact with it, it dissipates and heavily shocks the him or her.

Name: Blade of the Lightning God
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Description: The user focuses chakra into either arm and collects ambient electricity into a tight lattice around the forearm and hand. By compressing the electricity and chakra together, the user forms a single-use electrical blade. While the blade has no real substance and thus cannot block or parry, its side-effect more than makes up for it - the area around that which is struck by the blade will be instantly shocked numb

Name: Magnetic Beacon Technique
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Description: The user sends electrical waves to a metal object, causing it to turn into an electrical magnet. This jutsu has an advantage over the Magnetic Parry Technique in that the user need not touch nor hold onto the object to give it its electrical charge. It's very common to place a magnetic charge on an object held by an opponent, after which the user can track that person using a device similar to a compass


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PostSubject: Re: kiki clan(done)   Fri Feb 20, 2009 6:45 pm

~ Only the jutsus thought in the academy are only considered academy level jutsus everything else is higher edit the jutsus that are said to be academy jutsu and make them one rank higher.

Bombarding Hail [Hougeki Arare] (Stg 3)
Using this jutsu requires great chakra control, performing hand seals and sending chakra into the clouds. After a bit of development, a ninja will form the percipitation of the cloud into hail. This hail will fall for a brief time from the clouds and by chakra control be targeted at the opponent.
| Chakra- 80 | Damage- 120 | Jounin| 3 posts to develop and clouds must be over the fighting area. Creates grapefruit sized hail.

This is more of a Hyoton based attack and you must be from Haku's clan to use that so no to this one.

- Earth Element; Mud River [Doton; Doryu Taiga]
In this common earth jutsu, the user converts part of the floor\ground that he and his opponent are standing on into a sliding river of mud and earth. The opponent quickly loses his or her standing and starts sliding wherever the mud river will take him or her. | Chakra- 20 | Advanced Genin

Bump this up to one rank higher

Volcanic Rock of Pain [Kazangan no Itami]
The user sends chackra through the ground, which brings up a large rock filled with liquid hot magma. The user sends it toward their opponent and controls its movement with their chackra. Once the rock runs into something it bursts open sending large amounts of the magma everywhere. Especially painful if it is on you. | Chackra - 50 (per boulder) | Damage - 70 (on impact) +10 (for magma) | Chuunin

This is more of a Youton jutsu and only the four tailed jinchuuuriki can perform such jutsu. I got to say no to this one too.

Lightning punch
Like the chakra punch it can turn boulders to dust in one hit. One of the main differences is the speed it is delivered and the static that is left behind…

turning boulders to dust in one punch is a bit much please make this a bit less powerful.

Static Clone Technique
After a row of hand-seals, several electrical fields erupt from the user's hands and form into vaguely humanoid shapes. A simple genjutsu is used to then make the fields look like the user or anyone else the user chooses. Although the clones can't exert any physical force, if an opponent comes into contact with it, it dissipates and heavily shocks the him or her

are you saying this is both ninjutsu and genjutsu?

Touch of the Lightning God
The user gathers a large amount of chakra into his fingertips and converts it to electricity. The electricity then bursts from the fingertips and seeks out the victim. The lightning doesn't rend the flesh, but instead eletrifys the opponent, seeking out and attacking the heart and nervous system. The pain this jutsu causes is said to be unbearable. Victims of this jutsu frequently have heart attacks within 24 hours after being hit, so medical care is highly advised.

no to heart attack

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PostSubject: Re: kiki clan(done)   Fri Feb 20, 2009 7:32 pm

Approved. Congratulations *gives you a cookie*

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PostSubject: Re: kiki clan(done)   Fri Feb 20, 2009 7:40 pm

yay! *eats cookie* x3 *ryu moko an riku all want a cookie too*
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PostSubject: Re: kiki clan(done)   Fri Feb 20, 2009 7:43 pm

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PostSubject: Re: kiki clan(done)   Sat Feb 21, 2009 6:24 am

DisApproved

Jutsu needs to be in this format and you need a Starting Village

(Use this when posting Justu)
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PostSubject: Re: kiki clan(done)   Sat Feb 21, 2009 11:29 am

Also, I have my doubts about this clan. Judging from the history and the clan techniques, this application is pretty much all about your character and her 3 brothers. In other word: Its an family application. What we're looking for is an actual clan application.

What techniques does your clan use? What is its history? Who's in it? And, like Minato states, you need a village. No matter where your character, roaming around the world as a missing-nin, may be, your actual clan itself most likely has a village it resides in. Since your clan pretty much seems to revolve around puppets, my gues is that it is from Sunagakure.
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PostSubject: Re: kiki clan(done)   Sat Feb 21, 2009 11:47 am

ya the sand village i gave it a small history @.@
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PostSubject: Re: kiki clan(done)   Sat Feb 21, 2009 3:11 pm

Alright i'll give it to you

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PostSubject: Re: kiki clan(done)   Sun Feb 22, 2009 8:52 am

Minato wrote:
Alright i'll give it to you

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She'll still need to redo the jutsu part though. We have an actual jutsu template now. You'll have to put your techniques into that template and repost them. Damage, chakra cost, this site doesnt use those things.
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PostSubject: Re: kiki clan(done)   Sun Feb 22, 2009 1:11 pm

Alright, going through all your techniques again got me onto some new flaws:

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Name: Water Instantaneous Body Skill [Mizu Shunshin no Jutsu]
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Water
Description: A technique which allows the user to transport from one place to another through puddles of water.

Name: Hidden Earth Instantaneous Body Skill [Iwagakure Shunshin no Jutsu]
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Description: An ability which allows the user to transport from one area to another by slowly lowering his body to the ground and eventually become "buried" in it. The user has to have been to the area before, and be able to sense the location with his own chakra before being able to transport him there. This means that the distance is limited to about one mile.

Name: Lightning pinpoint
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Description: By using any metal object you can transport yourself and others to it almost instantly.
You had to give every single one of your puppets an instant travelling technique, didn't you? These technique are, just like Yondaime Hokage's Flying Thunder God Technique, extremely rare and hard to master. I hope you understand I made all these 3 S-ranked.

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Name: Volcanic Rock of Pain [Kazangan no Itami]
Rank:
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Description: The user sends chackra through the ground, which brings up a large rock filled with liquid hot magma. The user sends it toward their opponent and controls its movement with their chackra. Once the rock runs into something it bursts open sending large amounts of the magma everywhere. Especially painful if it is on you.
Magma would be a combination of the fire and the earth element, Youton. An elemental combination unique to the host of the 4-tailed demon. You'll have to remove this.

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Name: Gathering Water Supply Skill [Saishuu Kyuusui no Jutsu]
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Water
Description: Naturally a ninja that utilizes jutsu that involve the use of water need water, naturally. As a way to combat lack of resources, this technique was developed in order to gather what is neccesary. A practictioner of this jutsu uses chakra to gather percipitation from the air, from condensation on objects, from plants into an area nearby. As the user's skill progresses, the area from where the user collects the water and how much they can gather increases.
Not going to happen. The only person who was capable of summoning forth water from air was the Nindaime Hokage, who was an extremely talented, Suiton-focussed shinobi. Theres no way you're going to do the same with a mere E-ranked technique. Absolutely no way.

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Name: Conductor Skill
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Description: The basis of all Raiton jutsu, Doutai no Jutsu allows a shinobi to absorb ambient electricity from the environment for use in electricity and lightning related skills. This collection of ambient electricity is a passive form of this skill, and thus can be used without exerting chakra.
So....will this simply make your techniques cost no chakra? Cause you're going to need a lightning storm to achieve that. Simply leeching electricity out of nowhere wont do.
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PostSubject: Re: kiki clan(done)   Sun Feb 22, 2009 1:13 pm

ok those i will remove.... an *hugs* thanks you for helping TT~TT
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PostSubject: Re: kiki clan(done)   Sun Feb 22, 2009 1:33 pm

there i removed those 2 jutsu the water an earth one... an also.... riku has a sword that sende eletice shock waves i think he could use the conduter skill to take the lighing out of it...
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PostSubject: Re: kiki clan(done)   Sun Feb 22, 2009 1:47 pm

Ah, so he'll be drawing the energy from his blade and use it in techniques? Thats ok, but note that the blade will run out of energy at one point. You cant keep drawing energy out of it forever. As long as you keep that in mind, I gues this is....well....approvable.

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