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 Hitokiri Shuu

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PostSubject: Hitokiri Shuu   Thu Feb 26, 2009 6:18 pm

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Name: Hitokiri Shuu

Age: 17

Gender: Male

Village: Konohagakure no Sato

Appearance: Shuu is a young man in his late teens of an average stature. Putting it bluntly, his aspect is all too normal and is the kind of person to be missed when in the middle of a crowd. His height measures around 5.6 feet and he has the appropriate weight for his size. Physically, he is thin but muscular in an athletic way. Which is to say that despite having developed his strength and agility, his muscles don't stand out much; giving him a deceivingly ordinary looking body. Never the less, at a closer view he is considerably handsome. He has no scars or spots tainting his skin which is slightly tanned, giving him an olive skin tone.

Shuu's clear brown hair is spiky, light and of medium length. This makes it to be windy and will often be seen waving about due to the breeze. In addition to his hair, Shuu's eyes are of the same color and will usually have a world-weary look to them, something rare amidst people of his age. Shuu has no facial hair, pimples or marks on his face whatsoever, giving him something of a baby face despite his age, something that most teenagers in the village also have.

In terms of clothing and equipment, Shuu goes along with most chuunins, using the standard issued suit and weapons for their being practical. In other words, Shuu wears the traditional dark blue shirt with the red swirl on the arms, just below the shoulder. The shirt is tucked in the pants of the same color, which has white bandages wrapped around a section of the right leg, directly under the shuriken holster. Over the shirt, he wears the standard Konoha flak jacket, a green flack jacket with the red swirl insignia on the back. It also has front scroll patches on right and left breast and has a zipper up the middle. In addition to this, Shuu uses your average shinobi sandals, which match the outfit's color.
Oddly enough, he doesn't wear his forehead protector, instead he prefers to keep it in one of his pants' pockets.

Likes: Quietude

Dislikes: Ruckus

Personality: Shuu is a stern but nice person, fiercely faithful to his way of the ninja. This is so to a degree than his nindo is also a good description of his personality. Not being a genius or gifted with a kekkei genkai, Shuu has grown to appreciate the value of hard word and the effort put behind it. As such, he grew to be a hard working, dedicated person who strives to improve himself as much as he can. In addition, he wants to become stronger only through his own means, something that holds him back at times. At changes where he could have taken the guidance of a higher ranking nin, he chose not to, knowing that it would stray him from his chosen path.

Not just a hard working character, Shuu is also endowed with a deep sense of justice and dedication. Upholding values such as honesty, respect, loyalty and benevolence, he absolutely despises people who go against those values, considering them to be bellow trash... And treating them as such. Even if good, such a sense of justice sometimes clashes with his dedication to the village as a shinobi. More often than not, he is forced to weight the value of a mission and it's benefits to the village in contrast to it's contents, and the job he is required to do. This leads him to much internal conflict, between upholding his duties and doing what is right.

Despite his dutiful and stern outlook on life, he is a sympathetic and empathic person, even if selective when being so. This side of him doesn't reveal himself to just anyone. More often than not, when someone hears about Shuu being exceptionally gently and warmhearted, they'll dismiss it as being a joke. However, there are situations where he acts like that. It happens to be only when he's around young children or alone with nature. Putting it simply, Shuu has a soft spot for children. This can be observed very easily as he gets completely out of character around them, growing exceptional patience and tolerance and going out of his way to tend to their whims. Not only around children but Shuu is also a nature lover, being particularly fond of trees. He has developed the habit of sleeping on the top of tree branches, he's often found taking naps whenever he's not training or on a mission.

History:
Uneventful days: Babyhood

That day, a raining, Winter day, marked the happiest moment of a middle aged jounin and his wife, the owner of a small store. Why was that day the happiest of the couple's life, you ask? Simple. It was just because a new life had found it's way into the world; a small baby boy, a cry baby as a matter of fact, had been born. This baby, the joy of his parent's lives, was named Shuu on the very day he was born. As a baby, Shuu was sheltered and pampered by his parents, who treasured and cherished him with great care, fearing of anything that could happen to the frail creature. As such, his early years were marked by an uneventful, spoiled life.

Shinobi in the making: Childhood

Once Shuu was old enough, at the age of 7, he was made to enroll in the village's ninja academy. Was the boy glad to begin his tutelage which would prepare him for his life as a shinobi? Not at all. In fact, on the first day of school his parents had to literally drag him all the way from his house to the academy. This incident became a rite which lasted for the first few days of Shuu's first year at the academy. But slowly, he offered less and less resistance, until he conformed with the fact that he simply had to go to school. Yielding to that fact, with time he grew accustomed to the classes at the academy and even grew to enjoy them and the friendships he acquired in the process.

As the years passed, so did the boy pass through the several grades as most of his friends did. At the academy, the classes weren't too difficult and the syllabus was basic. Very basic jutsus and elemental knowledge were taught to the students. Whilst Shuu wasn't exactly a genius he wasn't dumb either and absorbed all the of the classes with relative ease. Even if he didn't score first, or on the top of the list for that matter. In the end he passed the graduation exam without much problems, thus becoming a fully fledged shinobi at the age of 12.

The Genin: Body-Flicker Shuu

Once a genin, Shuu was immediately assigned to a three man team with another two boys, team 4. At first, team 4's captain decided that the young genins were still too green and that he needed to prepare them on his own, before taking on missions. As such, the first few months were filled by menial tasks and training to prepare the boys for the missions to come. Climbing trees, standing over water, the regular chakra control training. If he trained his chakra control during the day then, during the night, he would train he would train his swordsmanship katas during the night. He had been introduced to swordsmanship by his father on the very day he graduated, as a present of sorts. From there his father began teaching him the ways of the sword, teaching him the basic forms for Kendo, Iaido and Battojutsu.

Never the less, his kenjutsu training was all very hush, hush and nobody outside of his family knew that he was training in order to, one day, wield a sword as his main weapon. In fact, not even his friends knew about this and rather than kenjutsu Shuu, his friends named him as Body-flicker Shuu. This was so because, in addition to having developing his chakra control, Shuu revealed himselt to excel in the body flicker technique, using it as his as his primary jutsu during the missions. This routine of training his chakra control during the day and kenjutsu during the night, in addition to the favoring and mastering of the shunshin no jutsu, lasted for a year. It was the year the young shinobi's jounin reserved for training and preparation for the Chuunin exam...

The Chuunin exam: Rise of the Hitokiri

Once the year of preparation had ended it was time to take the chuunin exam. This decided, the team 4's captain proposed the boys to participate in the exam, something they accepted eagerly. When the faithful day came, Shuu surprised his teammates and captain to a high extend. What was the reason for the surprise you ask? The young man did something he had never done before... He was carrying a sword. While most wondered about this sudden change and the reason for it, he seemed fully confident on it's capacity.

Then the exam started. The first part went relatively calmly without any major incidents. Despite only answering with certain for two questions and writing something in another three questions to test his luck and try to get them right, what saved him was the final, trick question, which the entire team got right by chance.

The second part of the exam, on the other hand, was where Shuu shone. Engaging another team for their scroll, Shuu revealed himself to be on a completely different level when compared to prior to the exam, when he didn't have the sword. Molding chakra into his limbs to further enhance his already impressive speed and wielding his sword with deadly accuracy, he took down his foes with just the drawing slash of the sword, showing the results of his training. This style of fighting, focusing chakra on his limbs and using naught but Kenjutsu became a staple for Shuu which remained for the rest of the chuunin exam.

The second part cleared, it was time for the third. In the preliminaries, Shuu was paired against another weapons user. This, rather than focusing on a single weapon type like Shuu, used summoning scrolls and hurled weapons as his main tactic. This was what he did against Shuu. The shinobi used the Soushouryuu technique, throwing hundreds of edged weapons at the boy. Contrary to what was to be expected, he didn't try to outrun the barrage or block it with a broad jutsu. Instead, facing the barrage from his right side, he drew his sword and focused chakra on his right arm to a breaking point, putting immense pressure on it but also increasing drastically it's speed and strength. From there, he swung his blade around, moving his arm so quickly it left afterimages. From a spectator's point of view, it was beautiful. Sparkles rained around the ninja as the sword kept clashing with the shower of weapons. But this was not without a price. Shuu ended up winning the match but, as a result of it's abuse, the arm had torn ligaments and muscles, rendering it unusable for the rest of the exam. And boy, would he need his arm.

In conclusion, Shuu passed the chuunin exam, winning two matches against other ninjas once the official third part took place. Although he was bedridden as a result, the young man was glad to have finally passed the exam.

Peaceful Times: The Chuunin

Once a Chuunin, Shuu slowed down the pace, toning down his training in order to focus on other aspects of his life but not forgetting about it completely. Shuu took his time to learn new techniques, improve his fighting style and his physical performance, review his tactics and even his way of life. It was at this time that Shuu came up with his nindo and vowed to stay with the village for as long as it stayed true to a path he deemed to be right.

And so, he has spent 5 years as a chuunin so far. Not because he was too weak to try and aim for a promotion in rank but rather, because he was enjoying his life, there was no need for him to become a jounin as of yet.

Nindo: "Rectitude... Courage... Loyalty... Honesty... Benevolence... And respect! That is my way of the ninja!"


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PostSubject: Re: Hitokiri Shuu   Sun Mar 01, 2009 5:25 pm

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Element: Fuuton, Raiton

Rank: Chuunin

Skill: Kenjutsu

Clan: Hitokiri Clan

Jutsus:

Name: Chakra Scalpel
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Point cost: 40
Element: None
Description: Chakra no Mesu is a special Ninjutsu technique used by medical ninjas. After forming the needed handseals, the ninja will focus chakra to their hands. When their charged hands reach the body of their target, they can extend the chakra internally into the targets body to cut and neatly slice their muscles and blood vessels without harming the surface skin. This technique can be used in battle, but because of its hectic nature, the fine precision required for an instant kill is not feasible. Damage can still be done to the vital organs, but the technique should be used carefully in battle.

Name: Body Flicker Technique
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Point cost: 25
Element: None
Description: Shunshin no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja will appear and disappear in an instant, allowing them to retreat or attack suddenly. To facilitate the movement the ninja will often use nearby elements such as mist, sand or leaves to mask their appearance or disappearance.

Name: Lightning Element Shadow Clone Technique
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Point cost: 45
Element: Lightning
Description: Raiton Kage Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes lightning to create a Kage Bunshin clone. Because it is a Kage Bunshin, the Raiton version shares the ability to interact with the environment due to it having physical substance. This allows the clone to carry out limited attacks on its target. If the Raiton Kage Bunshin is injured, the clone will revert into its natural lightning state. Like in other Lightning Element attacks, should the target come into contact with the electricity, they will be momentarily stunned.

Name: Hien
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Point cost: 40
Element: None
Description: Feeding his chakra into his knuckle knives, Asuma will extend the length of his blades. An extra extension of invisible chakra will create a sharp edge that functions like the normal blade itself. Seeing his knives his opponent may misjudge how far they need to move to avoid an incoming strike. Even if they manage to avoid the metal portion of the blade, the chakra portion may cut into them as well.

Total Points used/left:[b] 150/0

[b]Clan History:
The Hitokiri clan is better described as a family than a clan, having but one household. One could say that Shuu's parent's are the first members of this clan. The particularity to them is their style of fighting, which is a tradition that started with his father. This tradition would be the focusing of kenjutsu as the specialty of the clan's ninjas. The clan members (Shuu and his father) embed Iaido, Kendo and Battojutsu into their swordsmanship, making it a blend of several movements and katas of several swordsmanship styles. This is so to an extend, that an unique kenjutsu style with it's own katas is practiced.


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PostSubject: Re: Hitokiri Shuu   Mon Mar 02, 2009 12:45 pm

Kai is C-rank and Chakra scalpel is A-rank.

Since Hien is B-rank it will cost around 40-70 edit the Point cost on it.

Lightning element shadow clone would be B-rank




E: 5 - 15
D: 10 - 25
C: 20 - 50
B: 40 - 70
A: 60 - 90
S: 80 - 110

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PostSubject: Re: Hitokiri Shuu   Mon Mar 02, 2009 1:56 pm

Fixed. For the Electrical Shadow Clone, Chakra Scalpel and Body Flicker, I used the values Sanbi told me to use. For the other, I made the value appropriate for the rank.
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PostSubject: Re: Hitokiri Shuu   Mon Mar 02, 2009 2:07 pm

Chuunin can't have A-rank jutsu.

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